tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post114513522532679273..comments2023-10-05T12:29:45.781-05:00Comments on Long and Writing Road: UntitledBailey Stewarthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00639029254352011915noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145552754833593462006-04-20T12:05:00.000-05:002006-04-20T12:05:00.000-05:00Oh I will.Oh I will.Bailey Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00639029254352011915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145551926894452912006-04-20T11:52:00.000-05:002006-04-20T11:52:00.000-05:00It looks like you're well on your way to creating ...It looks like you're well on your way to creating quite a file of good starts to great stories. Look forward to the day when you'll have the time you need to make your dreams come true.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145499751221720752006-04-19T21:22:00.000-05:002006-04-19T21:22:00.000-05:00It was supposed to be only 78 today - but got up t...It was supposed to be only 78 today - but got up to lower 80s. Still nothing like Monday. Now we have thunderstorms coming in and the humidity is rising.Bailey Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00639029254352011915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145495037988088182006-04-19T20:03:00.000-05:002006-04-19T20:03:00.000-05:00Still sweatin' ?Still sweatin' ?Toni Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08348843511453338339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145492635229331142006-04-19T19:23:00.000-05:002006-04-19T19:23:00.000-05:00I don't know - I'm not sure this is a love story -...I don't know - I'm not sure this is a love story - I think it will be a straight ghost story. We'll see.Bailey Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00639029254352011915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145491193787082942006-04-19T18:59:00.000-05:002006-04-19T18:59:00.000-05:00Wow! Girl I have have read more chapter 1's of yo...Wow! Girl I have have read more chapter 1's of yours :) you REALLY need to buckle down and just finish ONE of them!<BR/><BR/>This one is another great start...and they all just leave us hanging...come on...we want to meet Shay...because we ALL know that she really is not married with lots of kids and a broken down husband :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145490997315757612006-04-19T18:56:00.000-05:002006-04-19T18:56:00.000-05:00Thanks y'all!Thanks y'all!Bailey Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00639029254352011915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145486867448272702006-04-19T17:47:00.000-05:002006-04-19T17:47:00.000-05:00You definatly should write more of it. You have me...You definatly should write more of it. You have me intrigued and now I'm curious to see more.Christahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00309557439536380170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145475790883402672006-04-19T14:43:00.000-05:002006-04-19T14:43:00.000-05:00*g* told ya :o) lol (couldn't resist) rereading it...*g* told ya :o) lol (couldn't resist) rereading it again on here, its got great imagery!Lishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037890237546942702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145470979458809342006-04-19T13:22:00.000-05:002006-04-19T13:22:00.000-05:00Aren't you supposed to be working or something? Y...Aren't you supposed to be working or something? You know, keeping me in the lifestyle in which I would like to become accustomed.Bailey Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00639029254352011915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145470532010476112006-04-19T13:15:00.000-05:002006-04-19T13:15:00.000-05:00Oh yeah:Way to go, Shirley!!Congrats Toni & Hubby!...Oh yeah:<BR/>Way to go, Shirley!!<BR/><BR/>Congrats Toni & Hubby!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145470443970110042006-04-19T13:14:00.000-05:002006-04-19T13:14:00.000-05:00I had forgotten how evocative this is! Dripping s...I had forgotten how evocative this is! Dripping spanish moss & foggy bayous & a roaring Harley w/ a tortured-soul man... oh, sorry, I drifted away there. ;P<BR/><BR/>It's definitely more comfortable outside today. I was able to walk around the corner to the deli for lunch w/out an asthma attack! Woohoo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145468310863371322006-04-19T12:38:00.000-05:002006-04-19T12:38:00.000-05:00Ruby - I don't know why I stopped. I'd have to lo...Ruby - I don't know why I stopped. I'd have to look at the date it was created, but I'm going to take a guess that it was probably about the time that I took on a lot of extra time at work and didn't write at all for a while.<BR/><BR/>I hope everything goes well with you on the job thing. Good luck!Bailey Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00639029254352011915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145468017530495892006-04-19T12:33:00.000-05:002006-04-19T12:33:00.000-05:00This sounds like a really great beginning with all...This sounds like a really great beginning with all kinds of possibilities. Why did you discontinue it?<BR/><BR/>I'm glad it's not too hot down there right now. It's hotter here today than it was yesterday though I started off wearing a coat both days. The sun is really beautiful and for once there's little or no wind.<BR/><BR/>Just came from a class that helps you evaluate if you've got the "goods" to be self-employed. I sure hope that I have. There's very little possibility that'll ever get out into the traditional job market again.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145467413612008192006-04-19T12:23:00.000-05:002006-04-19T12:23:00.000-05:00Susie - it's not all confidence. A good part is t...Susie - it's not all confidence. A good part is that my time isn't ever all my time - it's always mom's. So I have to squeeze in time to write whenever - I honestly don't think I could make deadlines right now. I told Cece the other day that I'm just working now on getting a backstock done so that when this time with mom is over and I will actually have time to call my own - I'm going for it.<BR/><BR/>Jason - constructive criticism is always welcome. This is straight from my head and whenever I do that I just write everything that I see in the scene. When I go back someday and work on this (and I will) then I'll tweak stuff and remove excess. <BR/><BR/>Carol - So do I! Don't know anyone who will finish it for me, do you? *gg*Bailey Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00639029254352011915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145465881052420412006-04-19T11:58:00.000-05:002006-04-19T11:58:00.000-05:00I want to read more!I want to read more!Carol Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07018603523305326782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145465722021113512006-04-19T11:55:00.000-05:002006-04-19T11:55:00.000-05:00There's a strong core of great storytelling here. ...There's a strong core of great storytelling here. DEFINTELY keep at it. My one constructive comment (from a non-expert) would be to watch for over description. The more freedom the reader has to build the scene, the more alive it becomes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145460285451806062006-04-19T10:24:00.000-05:002006-04-19T10:24:00.000-05:00I like... And like everyone else has said it's tim...I like... And like everyone else has said it's time you start submitting your work. We believe in you. Borrow our confidence in your writing if need be and get out there...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145460177185939102006-04-19T10:22:00.000-05:002006-04-19T10:22:00.000-05:00Toni - yes it is! Susan - yes ma'am *salute*Will b...Toni - yes it is! <BR/><BR/>Susan - yes ma'am *salute*<BR/><BR/>Will be on and off the rest of the morning and then I have company coming in who will be here into the evening.Bailey Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00639029254352011915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145458951183901402006-04-19T10:02:00.000-05:002006-04-19T10:02:00.000-05:00Eve, what a wonderful story! Now that you've shown...Eve, what a wonderful story! Now that you've shown us just how capable you are of writing a book that could easily be published get your behind in gear and get writing again! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145457950887015442006-04-19T09:45:00.000-05:002006-04-19T09:45:00.000-05:00Great stuff Eve. Isn't it nice to pull something ...Great stuff Eve. Isn't it nice to pull something out and look and think 'this isn't half bad'?<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the congrats. Some days I want to kill him, but what can you do ;-) We were made for each other! <BR/><BR/>Nine years of marriage. Feels like one and a century all at the same time--kind of like having kids :)Toni Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08348843511453338339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145455897914720932006-04-19T09:11:00.000-05:002006-04-19T09:11:00.000-05:00Thanks Tanya. This is my ghost story and I will f...Thanks Tanya. <BR/><BR/>This is my ghost story and I will finish it some day. Honest. :)Bailey Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00639029254352011915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145455054583761382006-04-19T08:57:00.000-05:002006-04-19T08:57:00.000-05:00Nice imagery and the sense info puts me right in t...Nice imagery and the sense info puts me right in the scene.Shesawriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14904247751806210823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145454732011598212006-04-19T08:52:00.000-05:002006-04-19T08:52:00.000-05:00Thanks y'all *blush*Okay, okay Lis - I won't have ...Thanks y'all *blush*<BR/><BR/><BR/>Okay, okay Lis - I won't have to come up there and smack you. *gg*Bailey Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00639029254352011915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23142127.post-1145454351612940072006-04-19T08:45:00.000-05:002006-04-19T08:45:00.000-05:00I like it Eve. Your writing is crisp and evocativ...I like it Eve. Your writing is crisp and evocative, and easy to read.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.com